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Friday, November 16, 2012

Last night.......

Blogpost 7:


Last night,it felt nice to sleep outside under the stars,
i felt lonely on this earth,
under the roof of  Almighty.
your long lost memory came back to me,
like spring secretly come into the abandoned wilderness.
your smile flashed in my mind,
like gentle breeze with its fragrance over the burning desert blow.
your loving gaze ran through my mind,
like a soothing drug to sick distressed soul.



12 comments:

  1. Beautiful and touching.... it is going to be continued?

    For I would love to read more of this :)

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    1. hiya, thank you for your kind comments..
      keep reading.. :)

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    1. hie suraj, thank you so much for your support,it means a lot to me.
      keep reading.. :)

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    2. yes sure.....waiting for new poems...

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  3. u'hv a way with your words. very nice.

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    1. thank you so much for your kind words.. :)

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  4. hmmmmm now this brought some ,memories of the good old days in our village where in summers you slept under the sky


    Bikram's

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    1. i swear sleeping under the sky ,gazing the stars is one of the most amazing feeling.. it takes us to a different world.

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  5. This was so soft and beautiful ... loved the music in these words :-)

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  6. Hi Aswathy - Not sure if you write now though but some of your stuffs were enlighting ...I like close door writers..i myslf am one of them ...http://dare2write.wordpress.com/
    Have stopped writing des days with all the office work and stuff but i read other people blog to get some inspiration

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